Smoke drifts up and up,
As cigarettes sweep into her lungs
perfectly in sync with her heavy breathing…
From the end of the slim white stick
Residual ashes fall, cold and powdered.
She can hear it singe- the paper burning;
She can feel the thing- a beautiful sadness inside her soothing;
Almost done now.
The empty filter of tar burns and comforts her life’s lies….
Hoping to taste Marlboros someday, she smiles.
Beautiful! I like your writing style๐
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Thank you so much…. ๐๐๐
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Now that you have mentioned it, here is my take on similar note.. ๐๐๐
https://writtenframes.wordpress.com/2017/08/16/cigarette/
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Checked it already… Loved it… Thank you for the link… โคโค
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I thank you for I get to read such a wonderful piece of your work…
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Nice one
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Thank you so much…
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Beautiful!!
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Thank you
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Amazing!
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Thank you so much… โค
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I’m not a smoker, but your words made this seem delicious and inviting โค
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Haha…. Its good you are not… ๐๐โค
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It IS good. For many reasons. ๐
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Tried doing it… No idea if its added or not… Slow internet and I am sick of it.. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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I’m sorry?
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I am having a slow internet connection… ๐๐๐๐
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Awww… that’s so frustrating. But your words are coming through just fine! ๐
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Not being a smoker I can’t appreciate the urge for smoking Marlboros. Memories of Marlboro Man ad only brings to mind a man slowly being killed by smoking.
Your subjects are bold and writing style interesting.
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Haha, your memory of Marlboro Man ad is not just a memory, but the truth. Smoking actually is bad and can kill people. My intention was not to glamourize smoking but I just used it as a metaphor to describe the sadness and lonliness of the girl. ๐
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I like this!
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Excellent… You have totally caught me in the smoky atmosphere ๐ xx
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Really….? ๐ I am glad I did.. ๐๐
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